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Echo Chapter 14

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"—thinking, but how you're feeling about those thoughts." Silas held up the vial, the blue glow casting eerie shadows on his weathered face. "Every emotional response, catalogued and archived."

I stared at the glowing liquid, my stomach churning. "How long have they been dosing us?"

"Since day one," Silas replied. "But here's the kicker—different concentrations for different people. Some get memory suppressants, others get mood stabilizers. A few lucky souls get the full cocktail."

"Like Oliver," Juno whispered.

"Who's Oliver?" I asked.

Juno's face went white. "Maya's son. He... God, I almost forgot about him too. He was here three days ago, asking dangerous questions about why the grown-ups never seemed sa Then yesterday morning, Maya acted like she never had a child."

"The system erased him from everyone's memory?"

"Not everyone's." Silas pointed to a stack of papers on his workbench. "Old Henry came to me this morning, all shaken up. Said he'd painted another picture, but when he looked at it later, there was a child-shaped black void where someone should be. His hands remembered painting a boy, but his mind couldn't recall who."

A metallic clang echoed from somewhere above us. We froze.

"They're searching the ventilation system," Juno said. "We need to move."

"Wait." I grabbed Silas's arm. "You said different people get different drugs. How do you know who gets what?"

"Because I've been watching the food distribution. Claire—the nutritionist—she's been keeping records. Real ones, on paper." He pulled out a leather-bound notebook. "She tracks every meal, every supplement, every 'vitamin' they slip into the community food supply."

I flipped through the pages, scanning Claire's meticulous handwriting. Each resident had a detailed profile: dietary restrictions, medication schedules, even behavioral modification targets.

"Look at Liam's entry," Silas said.

I found the page. "Subject requires maximum cognitive suppression due to persistent investigative tendencies. Increase dopamine inhibitors by 20%. Note: Subject shows resistance to standard memory modification protocols."

"They couldn't break him," I realized. "That's why they had to kill him."

"Footsteps," Juno hissed. "Multiple sets, getting closer."

"Claire wants to talk to you," Silas said quickly. "Tonight, during the evening meditation session. She says she can provide clean food and water, but she needs something in return."

"What?"

"A way out of this place."

The workshop door burst open. Marcus Thorne filled the doorway, his bulk silhouetted against the corridor lighting. In his hand was what looked like a police baton, but as he stepped closer, I could see the words etched into the metal: "Memory Cleanser 004."

"Well, well," Thorne's voice was silk over steel. "The good doctor and her new friends. Silas, step away from them. Now."

"Marcus, please," Silas said, raising his hands. "They're just curious about the community. Nothing wrong with that."

"Nothing wrong?" Thorne's laugh was harsh. "They've been in the restricted levels, accessing classified files. That the community."

"Treason?" I stepped forward. "This isn't a country, Thorne. It's a prison."

"Watch your mouth." He activated the baton. Blue electricity arced between the contacts. "This little beauty can scramble brain waves just enough to make you forget why you were upset in the first place. Very humane. Very effective."

Behind him, Nathan appeared with two security guards I didn't recognize. But what made my blood freeze was the sight of the person following them—Sophia Chen, carrying a tablet and wearing surgical gloves.

"Dr. Reed," Sophia's voice was clinically professional. "You've been quite the busy bee. Mr. Gray has been tracking your stress responses all evening—elevated heart rate, dilated pupils, perspiration patterns consistent with acute anxiety. Fascinating data."

"You've been monitoring my vital signs?"

"Every second of every day since you arrived." She tapped her tablet. "Your biometric signature is quite unique. Baseline stress levels 40% higher than the community average, with unusual spikes during interpersonal conversations. Most telling."

Nathan stepped closer. "Evelyn, this doesn't have to be difficult. Just come with us. Dr. Fischer wants to help you process tonight's information."

"Process it how? With electroshock therapy?"

"Where did you—" Nathan's eyes narrowed. "What have you been reading?"

"Enough to know what you did to Liam. Enough to know what you're planning for me."

Thorne raised the baton. "That's enough talking."

"Wait." Sophia held up a hand. "Dr. Reed, I'm curious. What do you think happened to the boy?"

"What boy?"

"Oliver. Maya's son. Surely you remember him? Precocious child, always asking inappropriate questions about adult emotional states."

I felt a chill run down my spine. For a moment, I could almost see a child's face, but it slipped away like smoke. "I... I don't know what you're talking about."

"Fascinating. The retroactive memory modification is working faster than expected. You met Oliver yesterday morning in the community garden. He asked you why no one ever cried at funerals."

Juno gasped. "The water—how much did we drink today?"

"Not nearly enough," Sophia replied. "Which is why you're both still capable of questioning. Marcus, I need them conscious for the next phase of testing. Use setting three on the memory cleanser."

"My." Thorne stepped toward us.

That's when Silas moved. The old man launched himself at Thorne with surprising speed, tackling him around the waist. They crashed into a shelving unit, tools and electronic components raining down around them.

"Run!" Silas shouted as he wrestled for control of the baton.

Juno grabbed my hand and pulled me toward a maintenance hatch I hadn't noticed before. We dove through it just as the workshop erupted in shouts and the sound of the electric baton discharging.

The maintenance tunnel was barely wide enough for us to crawl through. Behind us, I could hear Nathan shouting orders and Sophia's calm voice directing the search.

"Where does this lead?" I whispered.

"The kitchen," Juno replied. "If we can reach Claire—"

"Dr. Reed!" Nathan's voice echoed through the tunnel behind us. "There's nowhere to run. This whole facility is monitored. We know exactly where you are."

But as we crawled forward in the darkness, I realized something that filled me with hope and terror in equal measure. If they really knew where we were, they wouldn't need to shout.

Which meant their perfect surveillance system had blind spots.

And we'd just found one.

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