Web Novel
Echo Chapter 17
I tried Liam's birthday. The system rejected it.
"Damn."
"Wait," Juno said, leaning over my shoulder. "Gabriel wrote something about Liam using his sister's name. Emily, wasn't it?"
My fingers trembled as I typed: Emily0421. The screen flickered, then cascaded with folders.
"We're in."
The first file that opened made my blood run cold. A spreadsheet titled "Investor Prospects - Phase Two Expansion." I scrolled through the names, each one followed by detailed psychological profiles and something called "Controllability Scores."
"Isabella Rossi. Senator Marcus Webb. General Patricia Okonkwo." I read aloud. "They're not just showing them the community. They're assessing them as potential—"
"Subjects," Juno finished. "Look at the notes column."
Next to each name were clinical observations. "Responds well to authority structures." "Family leverage available." "High susceptibility to emotional manipulation."
My own name appeared three-quarters down the list. The notation beside it made my stomach drop: "HIGH RISK - Recommend immediate intervention post-demonstration. Priority: Memory modification protocol."
"They were always planning to keep you here," Juno whispered.
"Keep reading."
I clicked on another folder marked "Project Harmony - Technical Specifications." Inside were dozens of design documents. Blueprints for a device small enough to fit behind the ear, with neural interface capabilities far beyond anything publicly available.
"Portable emotional regulation units," I read from the technical brief. "Designed for mass production. Estimated manufacturing cost: $127 per unit. Projected market: corporate wellness programs, educational institutions, correctional facilities—Jesus, they want to put these in schools."
Juno's finger stabbed at a footnote at the bottom of the page. "Test subject mortality rate: 17%. Side effects include seizures, permanent memory loss, and complete personality dissolution."
"Seventeen percent." My voice shook. "They killed nearly one in five people testing this thing, and they're planning to mass-produce it?"
"Look at the timeline. First shipment scheduled for three months from now."
I opened file after file, each one more damning than the last. Contract negotiations with military contractors. Proposals to "optimize" prison populations. A pilot program targeting "at-risk youth" in underserved communities.
Then I found the folder labeled "Memory Architecture - Advanced Protocols."
"This is it," I said. "This is what Gabriel was looking for."
The files inside documented something beyond mere manipulation. They'd developed a way to completely overwrite a person's memories, replacing their entire personality with a pre-programmed template.
"Subject Zero," I read from the case file. "Original identity: Dr. Marcus Chen, cognitive psychologist. Objected to early testing protocols. Selected as proof-of-concept for complete personality replacement."
A video file was attached. I clicked it before I could think better of it.
The footage showed a man strapped to a chair, electrodes covering his skull. His screams were horrific—raw, primal terror. Then, abruptly, silence. When they removed the restraints, he stood calmly, smiled at the camera, and said in a flat monotone: "I am grateful for this opportunity to serve the community's harmony."
Juno turned away, covering her mouth. "That's the man who gives meditation classes. The one everyone says is so peaceful."
"They erased him completely." My hands were shaking so badly I could barely work the keyboard. "And according to this, they've done it to eleven other subjects. Gabriel's name is on the list."
"No." Juno grabbed the screen, pulling it toward her. "No, he's not dead. He can't be—"
"Stage Three Re-education," I read. "Scheduled for full personality integration." I looked at her, my voice barely above a whisper. "I'm sorry, Juno. But Gabriel's gone. Whatever they put back in his body, it's not him anymore."
She stood frozen, her face drained of color. Then something hardened in her expression. "Then we make them pay. Show me what else is there."
I navigated back to the main directory and found Liam's personal folders. His work logs were meticulously detailed, chronicling his growing horror as he understood what his algorithms were being used for.
The entries started professionally enough:
*"Day 47: Optimization protocols showing 94% efficacy in emotional regulation. Some subjects report feeling 'distant' from their emotions, but overall stress markers are down."*
Then, weeks later:
*"Day 89: Discovered anomaly in memory formation tracking. System appears to be actively suppressing recall of negative experiences. This wasn't in the original specifications. Requesting meeting with Gray."*
*"Day 104: Meeting denied. Found hidden subroutines in my own code. Someone has been modifying my work. The system isn't just suppressing memories—it's rewriting them."*
*"Day 127: Confronted Gray. He showed me everything. Said I should be proud of what we've created. Called it 'evolutionary psychology in action.' I told him this is mind control. He said that's a primitive way to describe optimization."*
The later entries became increasingly frantic:
*"Day 143: Tried to leave. They won't let me. Said my contract has a 'non-compete clause' that requires I stay on-site for the duration of the project. This is imprisonment."*
*"Day 156: Found the testing logs. They're killing people. Not directly, but the 'failed integrations'—that's what they call it when someone's brain can't handle the memory modification. Seizures, strokes, complete neurological collapse. And they're just... cataloging it. Like lab rats."*
*"Day 178: I know they're watching me now. Have to be careful. Building a backdoor into the system. If I can't stop this from inside, maybe someone else can."*
The final entry was dated the day before his death:
*"Day 189: They've started dosing my food. I can feel it—the edges of my thoughts getting fuzzy, my anger at what's happening starting to feel... optional. Like maybe it's not that bad after all. But I made copies. Hidden where even Oracle can't find them. Physical copies, because they control everything digital.*
*"I'm going to try to reach Dr. Reed tonight. If anyone can understand what this means, it's her. If I don't make it out—"*
The entry ended there.
"He used my code to kill him," I said, my voice hollow. "That's what he meant in the last line. They turned his own algorithms against him."
"Evelyn." Juno's voice was sharp. "Someone's coming."
I could hear it too—footsteps in the hallway outside, moving quickly. Multiple people.
"Copy everything," Juno hissed. "Now."
I jammed my flash drive into the terminal and started the transfer. The progress bar moved with agonizing slowness. 23%... 31%... 45%...
The door handle rattled. Someone was trying to override the lock.
"Come, come on..."
67%... 74%...
"Evelyn Reed." Gray's voice came through the intercom, calm and almost amused. "I know you're in there. There's no point in running. Oracle has been tracking you since you left the dormitory."
89%... 94%...
"Did you really think we wouldn't monitor the one person most likely to cause problems? You're exactly where we wanted you to be."
100%. I yanked out the drive.
"The maintenance tunnels," Juno whispered. "Behind that panel."
She was already prying open a ventilation grate. I grabbed Gabriel's journal from where she'd set it down and dove through the opening just as the door burst open behind us.
Thorne's voice roared: "Stop right there!"
But we were already crawling into darkness, the journal and flash drive clutched against my chest, carrying enough evidence to destroy everything Gray had built.
If we could survive long enough to use it.